Hmm... This one seems slightly jumbled.

For the first and third panels, I think only italicizing the words "behind" and "here" would make a definite difference.

In the final panel, the first blue box, don't end it with the triple dots, it adds a slight comedic tone when you see the "...He's a mercenary officer."
And when Sonja talks, I'm guessing the gist is that she means that Ester's plans seem unoriginal, so try something like "And yet, I would swear I've seen your tactics somewhere," or "I would swear I've seen your tactics somewhere ("before" could work as an optional ending for the sentence, as well as "somewhere else," etc)

And for the man in red in the final panel, how about "Excuse me, Captain Kemeny... Would you happen to be related to (insert title of Esterina here, Miss/Ms., etc here) Esterina?"

Haha!
This is brilliant, my good Shaix! (I love your name )

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Ooh, a lot of work here!

Beh io le apprezzo sempre in italiano però è bello che ci sia qualcuno che ti aiuta a correggerle. In questo modo hai un prodotto più valido anche per il mercato inglese Cmq muhahuahuahuauhuhahauhuahuahuahuahuahu LOL

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Questo ragazzo è proprio carino ad aiutarmi... Le mie traduzioni suonano abbastanza idiote a volte.

hehe I love them!

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Very funny (and the drawings are great, as always).

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Thanks! The drawings are rather old, now I'm getting a little less "manga" anyway.

True, but that's where I come in!

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"You know the world is going crazy when the best rapper is a white guy, the best golfer is a black guy,the tallest guy in the NBA is Chinese, the Swiss hold the America's Cup, France is accusing the U.S. of arrogance, Germany doesn't want to go to war..."

ROFLMFAO!